Focus on Concise Language:
* Use strong verbs: Instead of "He walked slowly," try "He sauntered."
* Eliminate unnecessary words: "The car was red" becomes "The car, red."
* Avoid adverbs: "She ran quickly" can become "She sprinted."
Prioritize Impactful Details:
* Choose your words carefully: Each word should have a specific purpose and contribute to the overall message.
* Leave room for interpretation: Don't over-explain, let the reader engage with the story.
* Focus on imagery: Use vivid language to evoke strong mental pictures.
Examples:
* Instead of: The wind howled through the trees, and the rain beat down on the roof, creating a loud and chaotic symphony of nature.
* Write: The storm raged, a symphony of wind and rain.
Remember: Sparse writing isn't about being short or lacking detail. It's about choosing your words and details carefully to create a powerful impact.