1. "Us students have a lot of work to do."
* Grammatically Incorrect: The pronoun "us" should be "we" because it's the subject of the sentence.
* Grammatically Correct: "We students have a lot of work to do."
2. "Please return the book when read it."
* Grammatically Incorrect: This sentence is missing a subject for the verb "read."
* Grammatically Correct: "Please return the book when you have read it." (or "Please return the book after you read it.")
3. "Who did you sell your old car to?"
* Grammatically Correct: This sentence is fine as is! It uses the correct word order for an indirect question.