General sloppiness:
* Untidy
* Messy
* Disorganized
* Careless
* Haphazard
* Rambling
* Unpolished
* Rough
Focusing on grammar and mechanics:
* Grammatically incorrect
* Full of errors
* Incoherent
* Poorly formatted
* Unedited
Focusing on style and clarity:
* Vague
* Ambiguous
* Confused
* Unclear
* Ineffective
* Awkward
Focusing on the writer's attitude:
* Lazy
* Disrespectful
* Inattentive
* Unprofessional
The best word will depend on the specific context and what you want to convey.