Here's why writers should avoid buried verbs:
* Weakens writing: Buried verbs make sentences less direct and less impactful. They add unnecessary words and create a passive voice.
* Lack of clarity: Hiding verbs can make it harder for the reader to understand the action taking place.
* Imprecise language: Buried verbs can often be vague and lack specific action.
Here's an example:
Buried Verb: "The company made a decision to implement a new policy."
Stronger Verb: "The company decided to implement a new policy."
How to identify and avoid buried verbs:
1. Look for noun phrases: Identify noun phrases that could potentially be verbs (e.g., "consideration," "implementation," "evaluation").
2. Ask "What is happening?": Ask yourself what action is taking place in the sentence.
3. Replace with a verb: Replace the noun phrase with a strong, active verb.
Instead of: "There was a discussion about the problem. "
Try: "We discussed the problem."
Instead of: "The company made a commitment to improve customer service."
Try: "The company committed to improving customer service."
By avoiding buried verbs, your writing will become more concise, active, and engaging.