What is the prper noun sentence old sailor told rufus stories abut his travel across pacific ocean?

1. Capitalization: "Old sailor" and "Rufus" should be capitalized as they are proper nouns.

2. Word Choice: "Abut" is incorrect, it should be "about".

3. Article: You need an article before "Pacific Ocean".

Here is the corrected sentence:

The old Sailor told Rufus stories about his travels across the Pacific Ocean.