Here's a breakdown of why:
* "Ascended to the pilot house" implies going up to the control room of a ship.
* "You fine feather" is a strange phrase that doesn't have a clear meaning. It might be a metaphor, but it's unclear what it's referencing.
* "In literal meaning" suggests we should interpret the previous phrase literally, but the phrase itself is already quite literal.
It seems like you're trying to convey a metaphorical meaning, but the phrasing is quite awkward.
To help you get a clearer answer, please provide more context or explain what you were trying to say. For example, are you trying to:
* Describe someone who is a skilled sailor?
* Compare someone to a feather, suggesting lightness or grace?
* Express admiration for someone who has achieved something difficult?
Once you clarify the meaning, I can help you find a better way to phrase it.