Here's a breakdown and how you could fix it:
* "Que tal como estas": This is a mix of two ways to ask "How are you?"
* "Que tal" is a casual way to say "How are you?"
* "Como estas" is another, slightly more formal way to say "How are you?"
* "Es pero que bien": This doesn't make grammatical sense in Spanish. It seems like a mix of "es" (it is) and "pero que bien" (but how well).
A more correct way to express a similar sentiment in Spanish would be:
* "Que tal, ¿cómo estás? Estás muy bien" (This translates to: "How are you? You look very well." )
* "Qué bien que te ves" (This translates to: "You look great." )
Remember, the most important thing is to use grammatically correct phrases!