* Missing conjunction: The phrase "lt also Island Sharks" is not connected to the first part of the sentence. It needs a conjunction like "and," "but," or "which" to create a logical link.
* Unclear meaning: It's unclear what the sentence is trying to convey. Is "lt" a typo for "it"? Is "Island Sharks" referring to a group of sharks that are near the island, or is it another name for the island itself?
* Sentence structure: The sentence is awkwardly structured. It would be more natural to have a subject-verb-object structure.
Here are a few ways to fix the sentence:
* Option 1 (Clearer meaning): "Out in the Pacific Ocean lies an island of unmatched beauty called Cocos. It is also home to a variety of shark species."
* Option 2 (More concise): "Cocos Island, in the Pacific Ocean, boasts unmatched beauty and is also known for its diverse shark population."
* Option 3 (More descriptive): "In the vast expanse of the Pacific Ocean, Cocos Island stands out as a jewel of unparalleled beauty. Its crystal-clear waters teem with marine life, including a variety of fascinating sharks."
By addressing these issues, you can create a grammatically correct and clear sentence that accurately conveys the information you want to share.