* The timing is unclear: It's not clear if "he" came in *while* you were starting your homework, or *after* you had already started.
* Passive voice: Using "was starting" is passive voice, which makes the sentence less direct.
Here are some ways to rephrase the sentence for better clarity:
* "He came in while I was starting my homework." (This makes the timing clear)
* "I was about to start my homework when he came in." (This emphasizes the interruption)
* "He came in, interrupting me as I began my homework." (This is more dramatic)
Choose the option that best fits the context of your story or conversation.