However, you could make it slightly more concise and formal by saying:
* "Please find the attached report for your review and comments." (Adding the 's' to comments makes it plural, reflecting the expectation of multiple comments.)
* "Please review and comment on the attached report." (This emphasizes the action you want the recipient to take.)
Ultimately, both options are grammatically correct and clear. Choose the one that best suits the tone and formality of your communication.