* Grammar: "Precipitate" as an adjective means "done suddenly and without planning". It doesn't make sense to describe a *fighter* as "precipitate."
* Connotation: The use of "precipitated" twice in a row is redundant and doesn't flow well. It creates a confusing rhythm.
Here's how to improve the sentence:
* Clearer wording: "The hasty fighter issued orders that led to his victory."
* Alternative adjective: You could also use "impulsive" or "rash" instead of "hasty."
Here's another way to rephrase the sentence for a more impactful tone:
* "The fighter's sudden and uncalculated orders forged a path to his victory."
By avoiding the repetition of "precipitate" and choosing stronger words, you can make the sentence more concise and impactful.