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Which revision would be most effective in reducing the wordiness of following sentence Donald plopped dishes onto counter a way that appeared to careless.?

The most effective revision to reduce wordiness and improve clarity would be:

Donald carelessly plopped dishes onto the counter.

Here's why this revision is better:

* "A way that appeared to careless" is unnecessarily wordy. It's more direct and concise to simply say "carelessly."

* "Onto counter" is also a bit awkward. Using "the counter" makes it clearer and more natural.

This revision maintains the meaning of the original sentence while being more concise and impactful.

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