What is Elaboration?
Elaboration means adding more details or information to make your sentences more interesting and clear. Think of it like adding sprinkles to a cupcake - it makes it tastier!
Examples:
* Basic sentence: The dog was big.
* Elaborated sentence: The fluffy, golden retriever was so big that he could easily rest his head on my shoulder.
Here are some ways a fifth grader can elaborate on a sentence:
* Add adjectives: Instead of saying "The cat was scary," they could say "The sleek, black cat with piercing green eyes was terrifying."
* Use descriptive verbs: Instead of "The boy ran," they could say "The boy sprinted across the field, his feet pounding the grass."
* Add details: Instead of "The girl ate lunch," they could say "The girl carefully unwrapped her peanut butter and jelly sandwich, her stomach grumbling with anticipation."
* Use similes or metaphors: Instead of "The sun was hot," they could say "The sun was like a blazing fire in the sky" or "The sun was a giant ball of fire, scorching the earth."
Why is Elaboration Important?
* Makes writing more interesting: It helps readers visualize what you are describing.
* Helps readers understand: More details make your meaning clearer.
* Shows you are thinking deeply: Elaboration demonstrates that you are thinking about what you are writing and trying to explain it well.
Practice Time:
Let's try elaborating on a few sentences together. You can use the ideas above to help you:
* Sentence: The girl was happy.
* Sentence: The car was fast.
* Sentence: The teacher was strict.
Have fun with it! Remember, elaboration is all about making your writing more exciting and informative!