Why it's awkward:
* Missing a verb: "To those who are Irish" is an incomplete sentence. You need a verb to complete the thought. For example:
* "To those who are Irish, welcome!"
* "To those who are Irish, I wish you a happy St. Patrick's Day."
* Formal tone: The phrase sounds very formal and might not be appropriate for casual conversation.
Better alternatives:
* For Irish people: This is a more straightforward and natural way to address Irish people.
* To all the Irish: This is also a good option for a more friendly and inclusive tone.
* To our Irish friends: This works well if you're addressing a group of Irish people you know.
* To those of Irish heritage: This is more precise if you want to specifically address people with Irish ancestry.
Example:
Instead of "To those who are Irish," you could say:
* "To all the Irish, welcome to the festival!"
* "For Irish people, this is a special day."
The best choice will depend on the specific context and your desired tone.