Issue:
* "Past year" is a bit vague. It's better to be specific about the time period.
* "Have survived" needs a timeframe. While it's grammatically correct, it's not very clear.
Corrected options:
* "I have survived the past year." This is the most direct fix, adding clarity and a definite timeframe.
* "I survived last year." This is also a good option, but it implies a single year, not a period that continues into the present.
* "I have survived for the past year." This emphasizes the duration of survival.
Example:
Instead of: "I have survived past year."
You could say: "I have survived the past year, despite all the challenges."