1. "us students have a lot work to do"
* Problem: The pronoun "us" is used incorrectly. It should be "we" because it's the subject of the verb "have." Also, "work" needs to be pluralized.
* Fix: "We students have a lot of work to do."
2. "please return book when you"
* Problem: This sentence is incomplete. It needs a direct object after "return" and a time frame after "when you."
* Fix: "Please return the book when you are finished with it."
Let me know if you'd like me to explain any of these corrections in more detail!