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How do you correct the following sentence Leah read avidly about gardening although she had never planted one herself?

The sentence needs a few tweaks to make it more grammatically correct and clear:

Corrected Sentence:

Leah read avidly about gardening, although she had never planted a garden herself.

Explanation of Changes:

* "One" to "a garden": "One" is a bit vague and doesn't specifically refer to a garden. Using "a garden" makes it clear what Leah hasn't planted.

* Added comma after "gardening": This clarifies the relationship between the two clauses. It shows that "although she had never planted a garden herself" is a separate clause that adds information about Leah's reading.

This revised sentence is now grammatically correct and conveys the intended meaning more effectively.

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