Revised Sentence:
"I, the undersigned, hereby authorize Ms. Lim to encash my SSS check."
Here's why the revision is better:
* "I, the undersigned": This is a more formal and clearer way to state that you are the person authorizing the action.
* Ms. Lim: Using "Ms." is a respectful title.
* Encash: While "encash" is technically correct, you can use "cash" for a more straightforward and common phrasing.
Final version:
"I, the undersigned, hereby authorize Ms. Lim to cash my SSS check."