* "Embracing Excellence Driven Values" is grammatically incorrect because it doesn't form a complete sentence. It's missing a verb.
* "Excellent Values" is not a sentence. It's a noun phrase.
Here are some ways to correct the sentences:
Option 1: Focusing on the action of embracing
* "We embrace excellence-driven values." This sentence clearly states who is embracing the values and uses a proper grammatical structure.
Option 2: Focusing on the values themselves
* "Our values are driven by excellence." This emphasizes the values and their motivation.
Option 3: Combining both ideas
* "Embracing excellence-driven values is crucial to our success." This sentence combines the action and the values.
Which sentence is best depends on the context and what you want to emphasize.